I suggest following changes because it has the same signification and is shorter :
Currently | Suggestion |
---|---|
Données mobiles | Données |
Lampe de poche | Torche |
Positionnement | Localisation |
Ne pas déranger ¹ | Ne pas gêner |
Accéder au paramètres du menu supérieur ¹ | Paramètres du menu supérieur ² |
Ouvrir les paramètres du menu supérieur |
¹For the two last one, I’m not totally satisfied and there are just present because they take less space on screen
² I think it’s not necessary to use a verb. Logically you know clicking on this area will open that